Comments on: Super Youth Pastor: the Shadow revealed

By: Helen

Helen — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 22:06:33 +0000

I am feeling a little lost as to who the Planner is… I am concerned that the Planner may be the enemy, and even more concerned that the Planner may be someone else who isn't scary and I should recognize…

By: Nick the Geek

Nick the Geek — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 18:06:28 +0000

Just thought I'd share this, I have two purposes in writing the SYP series. First, I need to blow off some steam so SYP gets to take on people and issues that I can't tackle head on or at all. It would be nice if you could physically break the church split engine but not so in reality. The second is a writing exercise. This is why SYP is released in scene installments. Each scene I am trying to focus on specific aspects of writing. Setting, characters, various plot devices, those sort of things. Any criticism on writing is welcome so please let me know what is and isn't working.

By: Nick the Geek

Nick the Geek — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 18:01:37 +0000

The way the toxin works will go far in answering that. The clues are all there.

By: Nick the Geek

Nick the Geek — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 18:00:44 +0000

Hmmm, ultimately I think the Planner works for this shadowy individual. I wonder if SYP will ever face that mastermind?

By: Rebecca

Rebecca — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 14:51:55 +0000

Interesting…I can't wait to find out why SYP is defying the Shadow's mind tactics.

By: Steph

Steph — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 14:44:09 +0000

Oooooo, SPOOKY. Just right for Halloween. I suspect the Planner either is or works for some other guy who likes to work in the shadows and distract people from what they're really supposed to be doing. Close?